Directions: Today you will take each type of narration and maintain its components by continuing to write the story that has been introduced. To do so, we need to review what first, second, and third person point of view entail.
First Person Point of View: This type of narration is when YOU tell the story, similar to how you may write in a journal, and you use the following pronouns: I, me, my, mine, our, ours, us, we Example #1: I was sitting on the beach one day when it all happened. My friend from high school, whom I had not seen in years, was suddenly approaching me from the sandy shore. My first thought was where had she been all this time? Second Person Point of View: This type of narration uses the pronouns you, your, yours while describing a scene that does not include you as the writer. Example #2: You walk into a dark alley, which you realize was not the best choice. You suddenly decide not to risk it, and you turn to head back to your car. But something stops you before you can move. Third Person Omniscient Point of View: This type of narration is the most flexible, and it allows you to tell a story from the outside looking in. You, as the writer, are not in the story itself, but you can get into the minds of each character if you would like. (Note: The word omniscient is defined as knowing everything.) Pronouns you could use would be: he, his, her, hers, his, their, theirs, it, its, himself, herself, itself, them, themselves Example #3: The concert arena was filled with thousands of excited spectators. They had just been informed by the DJ that one lucky guest would win a backstage pass to meet the band, while another would win a bag of t-shirts, CDs, and other fan gear. Simone and her friends held onto their tickets tightly, each one waiting to see if her seat number would be selected as the winner tonight. Important Note: Third Person Limited Point of View differs from the above omniscient point of view in that while you are still not in the story, you can only allow the reader to know the thoughts of one of the characters. (You are limited to selecting only one character whose thoughts and feelings you can reveal.) We will not be using this viewpoint in today's exercises, but we will in the future! YOUR TURN: Now...go back to Example #1, which is listed above, and use it as a story starter. Continue to write a story using the correct point of view shown in that example. Do this with Examples #2 and #3, as well. Each story should continue from the viewpoint used in the introductory sentences. This is the same type of activity that we have done all year with story starters and photo prompts--except this time, we are focusing on point of view in particular! In the end, you will have three different pieces of writing that were completed in three different viewpoints. The stories can be as long or as short as you would like, but please remember to maintain the point of view that is consistent with that particular exercise! As always, enjoy the process! I know you will do well with this activity, and I cannot wait to read the stories you will tell! Be sure to type each story into the box on our Writing Page, include your email address, and hit Submit when you have finished! You can submit one story at a time or all three of them at once! The box will extend as you type, so you do not have to worry that the length of your story is greater than what the box can hold! Thank you so much for working so hard this summer! Have a great day!
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How about a nice review on literary terms today? How many do you remember, not just by definition but also by usage? Can you tell which literary device is being used in each sentence below? There is a word bank to help you out, but NOT EVERY WORD IS USED! Enjoy!
A Big Hello to Everyone! I hope you're having a great week. It's nice to finally see some sun, and I truly hope this continues for a bit! The following exercises are more review work to keep your grammar skills sharp! Please continue to feel free to send me your answers and essays (on the writing form), and I will send you any corrections and edits. I have received some nice essays so far, and I am happy to see so many of you working hard beyond regular school hours! Keep up the great work!
Part One: Subject Work Directions: Please select the subject(s) in each sentence below. Remember that there may be more than one per sentence, so check to be sure the main verb works best with the subject you choose. Example: Matt and Issa played basketball all day. Matt and Issa (without the word "and") make up the compound subject in this sentence. The main verb or predicate is played, which works with both Matt and Issa. Your Turn: 1. Sheralyn, a crossing guard for the children, worked Monday through Friday every morning of the school year. Subject: __________________________________ 2. Kenika and Jill selected some nice back-to-school clothes from Macy's yesterday. Subject: _____________________________________________ 3. There were two boys waiting for ice cream at the new store. Subject: (Hint: The subject is NOT there, which is an adverb! Ask yourself which noun or pronoun in the sentence is doing the action!) ___________________________________ 4. Dave and Domenic, two young men from Somerville, were picked to play in the NFL! Subject: ______________________________________________ 5. The quick and compassionate firefighters were able to guide an entire family out of a burning building. Subject: ______________________________________ 6. There are four puppies waiting for adoption at the MSPCA. Subject: ______________________________________________ 7. Where is your new house located? Subject: ________________________________ (Hint: Flip the question into a statement to make it easier to find both the subject and the verb!) 8. My summer dress was a lovely shade of purple! Subject: ________________________ 9. Did you find your lost keys? Subject: ______________________________________ 10. The pancakes, French Toast, eggs, and bacon were cooked to perfection! Subject: _________________________________________________________________ Part Two: Find the Appositives Above! Directions: In the ten sentences above (in Part One), you will find two appositives. Write them in the spaces provided below. Remember: An appositive is a word or group of words that renames a noun in a sentence. Example: Massachusetts, our home state, has been very rainy this summer. Our home state is the appositive because it is renaming Massachusetts. It is another way to refer to Massachusetts! You could use it in place of Massachusetts, and the sentence would still make sense, as in the following: Our home state has been very rainy this summer. You could also remove the appositive, and the rest of the sentence would make sense, as well. Massachusetts has been very rainy this summer. Now find the two appositives in Part One, and list them on these lines: ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Part Three: Phrase Work Directions: Please find the prepositional phrases in the sentences below. Write them on the line that follows. Example: The people at the concert were clapping wildly! At the concert is a prepositional phrase that shows position. It begins with the preposition at, and it tells where the people were. This means it is an adverb phrase of place, as well. Your Turn: 1. It was difficult to resist the delicious ice cream at the carnival. _______________________________________________________________________ 2. Where in the front yard did you find your keys? _______________________________________________________________________ 3. I love to spend a day at the beach! _______________________________________________________________________ 4. Do you prefer to be in the sand or by the shore? (Hint: There are two in this one!) _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ 5. I bought so many books from Barnes and Noble! _______________________________________________________________________ Part Four: Clause Work Directions: Please find the clauses in the sentences below! Remember that a clause differs from a phrase in that it contains a verb and usually begins with a conjunction! Example: The house that Taylor almost bought last year was for sale once again. The clause in bold print provides extra information about the house, but it does not rename it. It also includes the word bought, which is a verb; this tells me it cannot be a phrase! Also, that is used as a conjunction! Try these: 1. Sally and Rowena went down to the Cape, but they could not find a place to stay! ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 2. Our neighbor's grass never seems to grow, yet she mows it every single week. ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ 3. If I call this number, will I get a person or a machine on my phone? ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ 4. Do not leave your house until you hear from me! ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ 5. My sister took a nice vacation, and she relaxed and had a great time! ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ BONUS: Which of the above clauses are independent clauses (meaning they can stand alone) and which ones are dependent (meaning they must rely on the rest of the sentence to make sense)? ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ I hope you had fun with these exercises, and I look forward to receiving your work! Have a wonderful evening! |
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